I really want to be famous so I am going to go back in time and invent democracy. So I waked up to the tyranny and said I have invented a new government power and he threw me out. So I made a mob and told them all about the new government power called democracy. So the mob and I marched in the palace and over thron the tyranny. After I walked down the street and saw a family that had nothing. So I gave them the all the credit and got ran out of town for sting all the credit.
Your M9 is good but you should add more.
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I like how you start strong. I also like how you make a mob.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you gave somebody the credit(the family)
ReplyDeleteI liked when you created a democracy.
ReplyDeleteya i like the idea of a democracy . and i liked the mob and how you gave the family all the credit nice job buddy!
ReplyDeleteI like Democracy good for u.
ReplyDeleteThanks for inventing Democracy, sorry the people ran you out of town.
ReplyDeletei like the idea bob good job :}. ii also like how it is short and how it pretty funny.
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