Although you had some great photos, it would have been better if you had more writing.
You used a great use of photos, but there was some misspellings in your sentences.
You formatted your post well, but you didn't have a lot of facts.
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After I finished reading it, I figured it could use some more writing even though it had great pictures.
You chose some excellent pictures, so you should write some excellent things!
Leonardo Da Vinni was one of the best painters in the world and one of the most famous one. his work was one of the best like the Mona Lisa 
Although you had some great photos, it would have been better if you had more writing.
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ReplyDeleteYou formatted your post well, but you didn't have a lot of facts.
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ReplyDeleteAfter I finished reading it, I figured it could use some more writing even though it had great pictures.
ReplyDeleteYou chose some excellent pictures, so you should write some excellent things!
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